October Girl

Welll, you can't just leave! :shock: .... Well you can but.... We don't want you to! Don't leave... please? P.S. Your not a jerk. Don't leave!!!

Well, I did like this poem.... but I do think you could have added a little more.... Maybe you could tell us what you like about him... Maybe this could ...

First things first.... Yay YWS!!!!! To those who have dicovered this website and to those yet to discover it. :D :D :D As Always -Max

Banned for having an awesome avatar!

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! It's got so much emotion behind it. You didn't force anything it flows together nicely. I have nothing more to say than.... WOW As always -Max

Banned for having a cat on your avatar

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Banned for banning a duck on a writing site 8)

This made me sad.... not in a good way either.... depressed really. The point of this useless crit is that you poured your feelings on paper or in this case.... ...

studder

Ok everyone asked Martin Luther King "Why did the chicken cross the road?" King replies "The chicken had a dream."

Banned for ....... everything!!!

Welcome dear, I'm Max. If your having trouble why don't you just start a storybook. Where you create rules and a setting and others will help you they create their ...

Chelsea; Chelsea got out of her truck her hair flying in her face. She slammed the door shut and walked into green grass. She was heading for the woods. She ...

This is a very good poem but I think you might have some grammer errors. Some of your words are mispelled and honey, that's what spell-check is for. It does ...